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It is better now, but amusingly - "The other guy is not as well as you, but better with bowling.", in this case it should be "The other guy is not as good as yo
by seiwyn 15y ago
It is better now, but amusingly - "The other guy is not as well as you, but better with bowling.", in this case it should be "The other guy is not as good as you".
Great article, though.
- grobmeier 15y agoUps - thanks, fixed that too. I was definitely not focused enough. The whole feedback on this post is just overwhelming.
- bobz 15y agoCheers for taking the time to respond to feedback and learn. Also, props on how strong and well written the English is in general! And, most importantly, loved the article. :) (I thought this whole thread was a good example of how to actually do good feedback. )
- grobmeier 15y agoThank you for the kind words. It is actually very difficult to estimate if the article is well written or not if you are not using you mother tongue (at least this is how I feel about it). So I consider your comment very motivating!