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Here is what our listing looked like before Textio, with a ~40ish score on their scale: https://gist.github.com/enndott/3770037233b854a810f1 https://gist.githu
by koddi 11y ago
Here is what our listing looked like before Textio, with a ~40ish score on their scale:
https://gist.github.com/enndott/3770037233b854a810f1 https://gist.github.com/enndott/3770037233b854a810f1
Here's what it looks like after, with an 83:
https://gist.github.com/enndott/3fdb88ddf955363ad2da https://gist.github.com/enndott/3fdb88ddf955363ad2da
Mostly turned we statements to you statements, softened some language (should vs. must,) went a little more gender neutral (premier vs. top tier,) and added an equal opportunity statement. It is recommending to use longer sentences and add more you statements to improve further. Thoughts?