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Hi Jake, I wish you the best of luck. My only suggestion would be to proof read it again. I found a few obvious mistakes. e.g. " I learned to do a lot of non te

Hi Jake, I wish you the best of luck. My only suggestion would be to proof read it again. I found a few obvious mistakes. e.g. " I learned to do a lot of non technical things things as well"

harel 11y ago
Just to add to that, this sentence needs reworking: " I have a ton of experience developing web applications, but I have worked with a variety of platforms and technologies to build software and have deployed software to the web, Mac OS X, and Linux." The word "but" does not sit well there. There is no "but" :)
- jhgaylor 11y ago
  Awesome! The page has been updated. I appreciate the feedback. :)
- mrmondo 11y ago
  Also probably reword 'I have a ton' - it's a little too informal I think.
jhgaylor 11y ago
Thanks! I've made a couple of quick fixes but will definitely do some editing on all of it soon. :)