It looks great, but be honest: did you really read through the whole story? I got bored pretty quick. The text just lost me..and it seemed to be a neverending

It looks great, but be honest: did you really read through the whole story? I got bored pretty quick. The text just lost me..and it seemed to be a neverending css showpiece, which is fine, but I don't think you can disguise that as an interesting news piece for too many scrolls.