Looking for feedback on the gameplay/style of the game, please. Also any suggestions for making a 'Full version' more worth it to the end-user... 'Story' twea

Looking for feedback on the gameplay/style of the game, please. Also any suggestions for making a 'Full version' more worth it to the end-user... 'Story' tweaks or suggestions too :) Thank you in advance, Pipsqueake Tools: Unity3D, Flash - More comfortable for me, especially cartoony graphics