My critique was aimed at the form of the disclosure, not the act itself. This may have not gotten through for various reasons. > Really? He gave you two tips,

My critique was aimed at the form of the disclosure, not the act itself. This may have not gotten through for various reasons. > Really? He gave you two tips, didn't he? I do stand corrected. Either the last paragraph was edited into the article after I wrote my comment, or I did not see it the first time. Unfortunately, I can no longer edit my previous comment.