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This: On October 28th, the Library of Congress decided to not renew an exemption for carrier unlocking cell phones* Should be changed as follows: "decided t
by kenthorvath 14y ago
This:
On October 28th, the Library of Congress
decided to not renew an exemption for
carrier unlocking cell phones*
Should be changed as follows:
"decided to not renew" => "decided NOT to renew" =(or)=> "FAILED to renew"
at first glance, I misread it as "decided to renew".
Also, "Library of Congress" should be changed to "Librarian of Congress"
- bjustin 14y ago"declined to renew" would be IMO better than throwing in an all caps word.
- kenthorvath 14y agoAgreed, caps here to highlight the change.