Thank you for your feedback! > Something about narrator felt like they weren't a real character and the whole story was just Aaron's third person. That wasn't

Thank you for your feedback! > Something about narrator felt like they weren't a real character and the whole story was just Aaron's third person. That wasn't my intention, but others have pointed out the passiveness of the narrator. The narrator is supposed to be a character in the story in this instance. Will bear this in mind for future first-person narratives.