To OP: Well written. Certainly bridges the gap between fiction and a plausible and believable first person narrative. Are you familiar with the US magazine Th

To OP: Well written. Certainly bridges the gap between fiction and a plausible and believable first person narrative. Are you familiar with the US magazine The Sun? https://www.thesunmagazine.org/ https://www.thesunmagazine.org/ I have read several short story submissions at The Sun; typically first person submissions which blur the lines between true first person stories, and fiction. Try to submit your story to The Sun.