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Nice. Story and your writing style tell more about you as about Aaron. IMHO, with the second paragraph, Aaron starts to fade into background. While you increas

by rfool 23d ago

Nice. Story and your writing style tell more about you as about Aaron. IMHO, with the second paragraph, Aaron starts to fade into background. While you increasingly describe your character in-depth, but also more and more often seem to advert an urge to apologize for ... something. I wonder what that is!?

sarreph 23d ago
> seem to advert an urge to apologize for ... something. I wonder what that is!? I'm not sure I would have a satisfactory answer for that one, I'm afraid. Thank you nonetheless!