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My two cents: 1. Clean up the formatting of the page a bit, it seems a bit choppy along the edges, especially for the visuals (at least as viewed on a laptop).
by southernplaces7 1y ago
My two cents:
1. Clean up the formatting of the page a bit, it seems a bit choppy along the edges, especially for the visuals (at least as viewed on a laptop).
2. Refine the content for the selling points about what it offers. It's grammatically awkward and wooden. Neither is a good idea in sales copy, especially in a service designed to help writers.
Other than that, looks pretty good, and good luck.
- WolfOliver 11mo agothanks, that is helpful