I think it's quite good, there's a sense of urgency, but it's also not "immediately change it!" they gave more than a day, and stated that it would be a tempora

I think it's quite good, there's a sense of urgency, but it's also not "immediately change it!" they gave more than a day, and stated that it would be a temporary lock. Feel like this one really hit the spot on that aspect. You should still never click a link in an email like this, but the urgency factor is well done here