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Man, sorry, I give up.

• pselle 14y ago
  Idan's talking about this still being up: "All concepts and screens looks great when you insert pics of models [strike]& nice girls[/strike], so here comes a part of my secret sauce:" There may be others I didn't catch. Thanks for fixing some of it, it stops the copy from distracting from the content.
• idan 14y ago
  Don't give up, don't be sorry—just fix it! Bonus: you learned something about writing copy for startups today. Every failure is an opportunity for a successful outcome.
  • jeffclark 14y ago
    It's OK to show some personality. It's even OK to offend some people sometimes. Correction: he learned something about writing copy for idan today.
    • mnicole 14y ago
      No, Idan's point was incredibly valid and I'm glad that the creator cared enough to make efforts to fix it.