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RIP my friend. Good thing you found the energy to warn us before dieing. By the way, your first sentence is missing a verb. Your second sentence is missing the
by Loveaway 2y ago
RIP my friend. Good thing you found the energy to warn us before dieing.
By the way, your first sentence is missing a verb. Your second sentence is missing the word "way". Your third sentence should end with a period and the first word should be capitalized.
I hope you can still use your last breaths to correct these mistakes. We must give our everything to avoid further casulties in future generations.
- holoduke 2y agoIs dieing a correct word? Should it not be dying? :)
- phanimahesh 2y agoNit: casualties
- nodoodles 2y agoIt's "R.I.P.", not "RIP".
- permo-w 2y agoit's not about mistakes, it's about style over substance