Thanks for the feedback! If we look at other products in similar categories, we can see that the first thing is the value proposition. You want to tell a story

Thanks for the feedback! If we look at other products in similar categories, we can see that the first thing is the value proposition. You want to tell a story to your viewer, and they will "remember" the pain by themselves - no need to write it in our own words. Or at least that's what we believe.