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[1] looks like a hastily prepared landing page for a dropshipped AliExpress product. 1 photo, no video. Why only Google Calendar? How to 'use your phone to conn

[1] looks like a hastily prepared landing page for a dropshipped AliExpress product. 1 photo, no video. Why only Google Calendar? How to 'use your phone to connect'? Is there a companion app? Why is contact page under Policies and labelled Imprint? Why 2 Privacy Policy links? About us section reads like boilerplate scam and links off-site to some random blog. Line height config looks ugly in bottom nav area. At least it works without Javascript.

konschubert 4y ago
Hi, thank you for having a go over it! This is great feedback. I find it really, really hard to take good pictures and even harder to take video. I am getting help with that and I hope the situation will improve. yes, there is a companion app, should I make that more clear? The contact page is labelled imprint because that's the law here in Germany... I could have an additional contact page though. The two privacy policies are because one is for visitors of the website and one is for users of my product. Two totally different contexts, and I was unsure how to fuse them. Probably also something I should get help with. I cut down on the about us section. But I agree this needs some work still...
- executive 4y ago
  Looking better already! On clickthru Shopify page, there are some decent photos. But would replace/remove the Amazon text in one of them. Also would show the back / cord & connector. Yes, would have apps page with direct links to store. Re: contact page. Is this actually true? This page for example still says contact when viewing Germany version of page. https://teenage.engineering/contact https://teenage.engineering/contact Re: privacy: you could have one link, with some way to show both once you get to that page. Few will read this anyway, may as well not clutter home page with 2 links. Good luck my friend.
  - konschubert 4y ago
    Thank you
  - VonGallifrey 4y ago
    > Re: contact page. Is this actually true? This page for example still says contact when viewing Germany version of page. That is a Swedish site and as a foreign organisation, they are exempt from the Imprint requirement in Germany. Imprint is generally something that should be present on a german website, though it isn't really enforced. You could get sued though if you don't have it.

konschubert 4y ago

Hi, thank you for having a go over it! This is great feedback. I find it really, really hard to take good pictures and even harder to take video. I am getting help with that and I hope the situation will improve. yes, there is a companion app, should I make that more clear? The contact page is labelled imprint because that's the law here in Germany... I could have an additional contact page though. The two privacy policies are because one is for visitors of the website and one is for users of my product. Two totally different contexts, and I was unsure how to fuse them. Probably also something I should get help with. I cut down on the about us section. But I agree this needs some work still...

executive 4y ago
Looking better already! On clickthru Shopify page, there are some decent photos. But would replace/remove the Amazon text in one of them. Also would show the back / cord & connector. Yes, would have apps page with direct links to store. Re: contact page. Is this actually true? This page for example still says contact when viewing Germany version of page. https://teenage.engineering/contact https://teenage.engineering/contact Re: privacy: you could have one link, with some way to show both once you get to that page. Few will read this anyway, may as well not clutter home page with 2 links. Good luck my friend.
- konschubert 4y ago
  Thank you
- VonGallifrey 4y ago
  > Re: contact page. Is this actually true? This page for example still says contact when viewing Germany version of page. That is a Swedish site and as a foreign organisation, they are exempt from the Imprint requirement in Germany. Imprint is generally something that should be present on a german website, though it isn't really enforced. You could get sued though if you don't have it.