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I’m really curious how close this translation is to the original. I’ve read Lem in multiple languages (not Polish) and found huge differences seemingly based on

I’m really curious how close this translation is to the original. I’ve read Lem in multiple languages (not Polish) and found huge differences seemingly based on making his wordplay “work” in the translated language.

Metacelsus 5y ago
In Polish, it's a mathematical tragic love poem. I've been studying Polish for 2 years, and I still don't fully understand all the wordplay here; it's pretty complicated. Nieśmiały cybernetyk potężne ekstrema Poznawał, kiedy grupy unimodularne Cyberiady całkował w popołudnie parne, Nie wiedząc, czy jest miłość, czy jeszcze jej nie ma. Precz mi, precz, Laplasjany z wieczora do ranka, I wersory wektorów z ranka do wieczora! Bliżej, przeciwobrazy! Bliżej, bo już pora Zredukować kochankę do objęć kochanka! On drżenia wpółmetryczne, które jęk jednoczy, Zmieni w grupy obrotów i sprzężenia zwrotne, A takie kaskadowe, a takie zawrotne, Że zwarciem zagrażają, idąc z oczu w oczy! Ty, klaso transfinalna! Ty, silna wielkości! Nieprzywiedlne continuum! Praukładzie biały! Christoffela ze Stoksem oddam na wiek cały Za pierwszą i ostatnią pochodną miłości. Twych skalarnych przestrzeni wielolistne głębie Ukaż uwikłanemu w Teoremat Ciała, Cyberiado cyprysów, bimodalnie cała W gradientach, rozmnożonych na loty gołębie! O, nie dożył rozkoszy, kto tak bez siwizny Ani w przestrzeni Weyla, ani Brouwera Studium topologiczne uściskiem otwiera, Badając Moebiusowi nie znane krzywizny! O, wielopowłokowa uczuć komitanto, Wiele trzeba cię cenić, ten się dowie tylko, Kto takich parametrów przeczuwając fantom, Ginie w nanosekundach, płonąc każdą chwilką! Jak punkt, wchodzący w układ holonomiczności, Pozbawiany współrzędnych zera asymptotą, Tak w ostatniej projekcji, ostatnią pieszczotą Żegnany - cybernetyk umiera z miłości.
- arcticbull 5y ago
  Curious what made you want to learn Polish. It's not exactly a broadly spoken language. There isn't really much of a diaspora. It was my first language, but I don't really get much practice these days - outside trips to the Polish Store to pick up some suche kabanosy.
  - Metacelsus 5y ago
    Uczyłem się żeby rozmawiać z rodzicami mojej dziewczyny. Mainly to talk with my girlfriend's parents. I'm also 50% Polish but never spoke it growing up.
  - kuboble 5y ago
    I believe love to be the major motivation of foreigners to learn polish.
- pmoriarty 5y ago
  Here's Google translate's version: Shy cybernetic powerful extremes He recognized when unimodular groups Cyberiads were integrated on a steamy afternoon, Not knowing if there is love or not yet. Away with me, away, Laplasiana from evening to morning, And vectors of vectors from morning to evening! Closer, counterpictures! Closer, because it's time Reduce the mistress to the embrace of the lover! He tremors half a meter, which a groan unites, Change into rotation groups and feedbacks, And so cascading, and so dizzying, That they threaten with a short circuit, going from eye to eye! You transfinal class! You, strong greatness! Unwind continuum! Pre-layout white! I will give Christoffel and Stoks for a century For the first and last derivative of love. Your scalar spaces have multi-leaf depths Show those involved in the Body Theorem, Cyberiada of cypresses, bimodal whole In gradients, pigeons multiplied for flights! Oh, he did not live up to the pleasure of anyone without gray hair Neither in Weyl's space, nor in Brouwer's A topological study opens with an embrace, When examining Moebius, no curvature known! O, the multi-skin of comitanto feelings, You have to treasure a lot, this one will only find out Who such parameters, sensing the phantom, It dies in nanoseconds, burning every moment! Like a point that is part of the holonomic system, Without the zero coordinates an asymptote, Yes, in the last projection, the last caress Farewell - the cybernetic dies of love.
  - macrolocal 5y ago
    Maybe just me, but the math here feels much more thematically coherent than in the official translation: love as holonomy; go for a spin and come back forever transformed. Fascinating stuff!
- jandrese 5y ago
  DeepL translate struggled a lot with that: Shy cybernetic powerful extremes He met when unimodular groups Cyberiads totaled on a sultry afternoon, Not knowing if there was love or not yet. The world of the world, the world of the world, the world of the world, the world of the world, the world of the world, And verses of vectors from morning to evening! Closer, counter-images! Closer, because it's time To reduce the lover to the embrace of the lover! He'll make the half-metric tremors that moan unite, He'll turn them into groups of turns and feedbacks, And so cascading and so dizzying That they short-circuit, going from eye to eye! Thou, transfinal class! Thou, strong of greatness! The uninhabitable continuum! Praucus white! Christoffel with Stoks I will give up for a whole age For the first and last derivative of love. Thy scalar spaces' multilinear depths Show the entangled in the Theorem of the Body, Cyberiad to cypresses, bimodally whole In gradients, multiplied into flights of pigeons! Oh, he did not live to enjoy, who so without gray hair Nor in Weyl's space, nor Brouwer's The topological study with an embrace opens, Studying curves unknown to Moebius! O, multilayered comitant of feelings, Much you must be valued, he will only know, Who, sensing the phantom of such parameters, Dies in nanoseconds, burning every moment! Like a point, entering the system of holonomy, deprived of the coordinates of zero by an asymptote, So in the last projection, the last caress Farewelled - the cyberneticist dies of love.
- lmilcin 5y ago
  Polish guy here. And Lem fan, too. Ask anything you want.
- karol 5y ago
  Native Polish speaker. To get out the max of this poem you need to be versed in Polish lang of course, but also mathematics and basic history of Polish literature. The poem is a mock-erotyk (quasi "poem about lovemaking") where the mechanics of love are replaced with mechanics of mathematics. It works very well with całka (integral) which creates a fantastic replacement całkować (determine integral) instead of całować (kiss). The other place that speaks volumes about this being satirical is an almost word for word quote from Polish national epos called "Pan Tadeusz": Wiele trzeba cię cenić, ten się dowie tylko" (Much you must be valued, he will only know), which for a Pole is an instantly recognisable stylistic device. It also mentions a lot of math which is either made up or way above my head so I won't comment about that.
  - samstave 5y ago
    We need a word for the curious, but ill-equipped, mind which seeks to understand the works of minds greater than our own. I am in love with all things - and I recognize that while I am "smart" I am not "smart" like others, but I seek to gain not just their understanding, but their wisdom oof the universe of thought.
    - int_19h 5y ago
      Philomath?
- xyzzyz 5y ago
  Here's a non-poetical translation in more straightforward English using standard word ordering in a sentence. Needless to say, Kandel's "translation" is not so much a translation, but really a completely new poem. Hope that will make it easier for you to appreciate the original: A shy cyberneticists got to know[1] some powerful extremes, when he integrated[2] cyberiads[3] on a steamy afternoon, not knowing whether there is love, or there isn't yet. Get out of my face[4], get out, Laplacians from evening to morning, and versors of the vectors from morning to evening. Come closer, preimages! Closer, because it's time to reduce the lover into the embrace of the lover[5]. He will change half-metric trembles, united by moans, into rotation groups and feedbacks[6], so cascading, and so stunning, that they risk a short-circuit, going from eye to eye! You, transfinal class! You, strong enormity! Irreducible continuum! White pre-structure! I'll give up Christoffel and Stokes for an entire century in exchange for the first and the last derivative of love. Show the multipronged[7] depths of your scalar spaces to the one who's entangled[8] in the Theorem of the Body[9], you, cyberiad of cypresses, entirely bimodal in gradients, multiplied into pidgeon flights! Lo, he did not live to experience pleasure, who so without grey hair, neither in Weyl nor Brouwer spaces, topological study opens with an embrace, studying curvatures not known to Moebius! Lo, multilayered comittant[10] of feelings, how much you need to be treasured will only be learned by the one[11] who, experiencing phantom of such parameters, dies in nanoseconds, burning every moment! Like a point, entering into holonomy configuration, losing coordinates of zero on an asymptote, in a last projection, with a last caress, dies from love the cyberneticist, when he's bid farewell. [1] - "poznawał" in original, past form of "poznawać", the most important meanings are "to be meeting a new person", "to be recognizing something/someone", or "to be learning something", hard to figure out which meaning is intended. [2] - "całkował", a mathematical term meaning "to integrate" [3] - a word made up by Lem [4] - "precz" [5] - first "lover" is female, second is male [6] - "sprzężenia zwrotne" [7] - "wielolistne", literally "multileaved", from "leaf", "liść" [8] - "uwikłanemu", probably a reference to "twierdzenie o funkcji uwikłanej", "implicit function theorem" [9] - "Teoremat Ciała", a more mathematical translation would have "Theorem of the Field", as the mathematical concept of the "field" translates to "ciało" (body) in Polish, similar to e.g. "Körper" in German, which also stands for "mathematical field". [10] - "komitanto", I don't even know what this word is supposed to mean in Polish. [11] - a verse from very famous Polish epic poem "Pan Tadeusz" by Adam Mickiewicz
Finnucane 5y ago
I know Michael Kandel, and asked him about that once. He admitted that there were times when he had to literally make stuff up to make it work in English. Tangentially, I once had a job where I had to locate passages in Phil Dick's novels based on English translations of French editions. In many cases it was non-obvious, in a few cases it couldn't be done at all. There were passages in the french that just didn't exist in the original.
- pmoriarty 5y ago
  "I once had a job where I had to locate passages in Phil Dick's novels based on English translations of French editions. In many cases it was non-obvious, in a few cases it couldn't be done at all. There were passages in the french that just didn't exist in the original." That's funny, because PKD once wrote of a game wherein the players translate from one language to another and back again (he wrote this long before computer translation existed, by the way). If anyone remembers which PKD novel this was in and any details about the game, I'd love to hear about it, as I no longer remember myself.
  - samstave 5y ago
    I am convinced PKD is a time traveler
  - srean 5y ago
    > That's funny, because PKD once wrote of a game wherein the players translate from one language to another and back again (he wrote this long before computer translation existed, by the way). The popular, over used, example of that would be: The flesh is weak but the spirit is willing. The meat is rotten but the vodka is good.
  - js2 5y ago
    It's Galactic Pot-Healer: https://everything2.com/title/machine+translation https://everything2.com/title/machine+translation https://scifi.stackexchange.com/questions/240589/need-author-title-source-for-short-story-with-translation-game-short-phrase https://scifi.stackexchange.com/questions/240589/need-author... Here's an excerpt: “Do you have a title for me?” Joe asked; he held his pen ready. “The Tokyo translating computer has been tied up all morning,” Gauk answered. “So I put it through the smaller one at Kobe. In some respects Kobe is more—how shall I put it?—quaint than Tokyo.” He paused, consulting a slip of paper; his office, like Joe’s, consisted of a cubicle, containing only a desk, a phone, a straight-backed chair made of plastic and a note pad. “Ready?” “Ready.” Joe made a random scratch-mark with his pen. Gauk cleared his throat and read from his slip of paper, a taut grin on his face; it was a sleek expression, as if he were certain of himself on this one. “This originated in your language,” Gauk explained, honoring one of the rules which all of them together had made up, the bunch of them scattered here and there across the map of Earth, in little offices, in puny positions, with nothing to do, no tasks or sorrows or difficult problems. Nothing but the harsh vacuity of their collective society, which each in his own way objected to, which all of them, in collaboration, circumvented by means of The Game. “Book title,” Gauk continued. “That’s the only clue I’ll give you.” “Is it well known?” Joe asked. Ignoring his question, Gauk read from the slip of paper. “‘The Lattice-work Gun-stinging Insect.’” “Gun-slinging?” Joe asked. “No. Gun-stinging.” “‘Lattice-work,’” Joe said, pondering. “Network. ‘Stinging Insect.’ Wasp?” He scratched with his pen, stumped. “And you got this from the translation computer at Kobe? Bee,” he decided. “‘Gun,’ so Gun-bee. Heater-bee. Laser-bee. Rod-bee. Gat.” He swiftly wrote that down. “Gat-wasp, gat-bee. Gatsby. ‘Lattice-work.’ That would be a grating. Grate.” He had it now. “The Great Gatsby, by F. Scott Fitzgerald.” He tossed down his pen in triumph. “Ten points for you,” Gauk said. He made a tally. “That puts you even with Hirshmeyer in Berlin and slightly ahead of Smith in New York. You want to try another?” [...] Dialing his phone, he obtained a satellite relay to Japan; he raised Tokyo and gave the digits for the Tokyo translating computer. With the skill of long habit he obtained a direct line to the great, clanking, booming construct; he bypassed its host of attendants. “Oral transmission,” he informed it. The hulking GX9 computer clicked over to oral, rather than visual, reception. “The Corn Is Green,” Joe said. He turned on the recording unit of his phone. At once the computer answered, giving the Japanese equivalent. “Thank you and out,” Joe said, and rang off. He then dialed the translating computer at Washington, D.C. Rewinding the tape of his phone recorder he fed the Japanese words—again in oral form—to the computer segment which would translate the Japanese utterance into English. The computer said, “The cliché is inexperienced.” “Pardon?” Joe said, and laughed. “Repeat, please.” “The cliché is inexperienced,” the computer said with godlike nobility and patience. “That’s an exact translation?” Joe inquired. “The cliché is—” “Okay,” Joe said. “Sign off.” He hung up and sat grinning; his energy, aroused by human amusement, surged up and invigorated him. For a moment he sat hesitating, deciding, and then he dialed good ol’ Smith in New York. “Office of Procurement and Supply, Wing Seven,” Smith said; his beaglelike face, haunted by ennui, manifested itself on the little gray screen. “Oh, hey there, Fernwright. Got something for me?” “An easy one,” Joe said. “‘The Cliché Is—’” “Wait’ll you hear mine,” Smith interrupted. “Me first; come on, Joe—this is a great one. You’ll never get it. Listen.” He read swiftly, stammering over the words. “Bogish Persistentisms. By Shaft Tackapple.”
ttctciyf 5y ago
You might like to read a page[1] which allows you to compare Kandel's version with a literal translation of the > poem about a haircut! But lofty, noble, tragic, timeless, full of love, treachery, retribution, quiet heroism in the face of certain doom! Six lines, cleverly rhymed, and every word beginning with the letter S!! which was duly delivered by Trurl's Electrobard in the same story. 1: https://mwichary.medium.com/seduced-shaggy-samson-snored-725b5a8086d9 https://mwichary.medium.com/seduced-shaggy-samson-snored-725...

Metacelsus 5y ago

In Polish, it's a mathematical tragic love poem. I've been studying Polish for 2 years, and I still don't fully understand all the wordplay here; it's pretty complicated. Nieśmiały cybernetyk potężne ekstrema Poznawał, kiedy grupy unimodularne Cyberiady całkował w popołudnie parne, Nie wiedząc, czy jest miłość, czy jeszcze jej nie ma. Precz mi, precz, Laplasjany z wieczora do ranka, I wersory wektorów z ranka do wieczora! Bliżej, przeciwobrazy! Bliżej, bo już pora Zredukować kochankę do objęć kochanka! On drżenia wpółmetryczne, które jęk jednoczy, Zmieni w grupy obrotów i sprzężenia zwrotne, A takie kaskadowe, a takie zawrotne, Że zwarciem zagrażają, idąc z oczu w oczy! Ty, klaso transfinalna! Ty, silna wielkości! Nieprzywiedlne continuum! Praukładzie biały! Christoffela ze Stoksem oddam na wiek cały Za pierwszą i ostatnią pochodną miłości. Twych skalarnych przestrzeni wielolistne głębie Ukaż uwikłanemu w Teoremat Ciała, Cyberiado cyprysów, bimodalnie cała W gradientach, rozmnożonych na loty gołębie! O, nie dożył rozkoszy, kto tak bez siwizny Ani w przestrzeni Weyla, ani Brouwera Studium topologiczne uściskiem otwiera, Badając Moebiusowi nie znane krzywizny! O, wielopowłokowa uczuć komitanto, Wiele trzeba cię cenić, ten się dowie tylko, Kto takich parametrów przeczuwając fantom, Ginie w nanosekundach, płonąc każdą chwilką! Jak punkt, wchodzący w układ holonomiczności, Pozbawiany współrzędnych zera asymptotą, Tak w ostatniej projekcji, ostatnią pieszczotą Żegnany - cybernetyk umiera z miłości.

arcticbull 5y ago
Curious what made you want to learn Polish. It's not exactly a broadly spoken language. There isn't really much of a diaspora. It was my first language, but I don't really get much practice these days - outside trips to the Polish Store to pick up some suche kabanosy.
- Metacelsus 5y ago
  Uczyłem się żeby rozmawiać z rodzicami mojej dziewczyny. Mainly to talk with my girlfriend's parents. I'm also 50% Polish but never spoke it growing up.
- kuboble 5y ago
  I believe love to be the major motivation of foreigners to learn polish.
pmoriarty 5y ago
Here's Google translate's version: Shy cybernetic powerful extremes He recognized when unimodular groups Cyberiads were integrated on a steamy afternoon, Not knowing if there is love or not yet. Away with me, away, Laplasiana from evening to morning, And vectors of vectors from morning to evening! Closer, counterpictures! Closer, because it's time Reduce the mistress to the embrace of the lover! He tremors half a meter, which a groan unites, Change into rotation groups and feedbacks, And so cascading, and so dizzying, That they threaten with a short circuit, going from eye to eye! You transfinal class! You, strong greatness! Unwind continuum! Pre-layout white! I will give Christoffel and Stoks for a century For the first and last derivative of love. Your scalar spaces have multi-leaf depths Show those involved in the Body Theorem, Cyberiada of cypresses, bimodal whole In gradients, pigeons multiplied for flights! Oh, he did not live up to the pleasure of anyone without gray hair Neither in Weyl's space, nor in Brouwer's A topological study opens with an embrace, When examining Moebius, no curvature known! O, the multi-skin of comitanto feelings, You have to treasure a lot, this one will only find out Who such parameters, sensing the phantom, It dies in nanoseconds, burning every moment! Like a point that is part of the holonomic system, Without the zero coordinates an asymptote, Yes, in the last projection, the last caress Farewell - the cybernetic dies of love.
- macrolocal 5y ago
  Maybe just me, but the math here feels much more thematically coherent than in the official translation: love as holonomy; go for a spin and come back forever transformed. Fascinating stuff!
jandrese 5y ago
DeepL translate struggled a lot with that: Shy cybernetic powerful extremes He met when unimodular groups Cyberiads totaled on a sultry afternoon, Not knowing if there was love or not yet. The world of the world, the world of the world, the world of the world, the world of the world, the world of the world, And verses of vectors from morning to evening! Closer, counter-images! Closer, because it's time To reduce the lover to the embrace of the lover! He'll make the half-metric tremors that moan unite, He'll turn them into groups of turns and feedbacks, And so cascading and so dizzying That they short-circuit, going from eye to eye! Thou, transfinal class! Thou, strong of greatness! The uninhabitable continuum! Praucus white! Christoffel with Stoks I will give up for a whole age For the first and last derivative of love. Thy scalar spaces' multilinear depths Show the entangled in the Theorem of the Body, Cyberiad to cypresses, bimodally whole In gradients, multiplied into flights of pigeons! Oh, he did not live to enjoy, who so without gray hair Nor in Weyl's space, nor Brouwer's The topological study with an embrace opens, Studying curves unknown to Moebius! O, multilayered comitant of feelings, Much you must be valued, he will only know, Who, sensing the phantom of such parameters, Dies in nanoseconds, burning every moment! Like a point, entering the system of holonomy, deprived of the coordinates of zero by an asymptote, So in the last projection, the last caress Farewelled - the cyberneticist dies of love.
lmilcin 5y ago
Polish guy here. And Lem fan, too. Ask anything you want.
karol 5y ago
Native Polish speaker. To get out the max of this poem you need to be versed in Polish lang of course, but also mathematics and basic history of Polish literature. The poem is a mock-erotyk (quasi "poem about lovemaking") where the mechanics of love are replaced with mechanics of mathematics. It works very well with całka (integral) which creates a fantastic replacement całkować (determine integral) instead of całować (kiss). The other place that speaks volumes about this being satirical is an almost word for word quote from Polish national epos called "Pan Tadeusz": Wiele trzeba cię cenić, ten się dowie tylko" (Much you must be valued, he will only know), which for a Pole is an instantly recognisable stylistic device. It also mentions a lot of math which is either made up or way above my head so I won't comment about that.
- samstave 5y ago
  We need a word for the curious, but ill-equipped, mind which seeks to understand the works of minds greater than our own. I am in love with all things - and I recognize that while I am "smart" I am not "smart" like others, but I seek to gain not just their understanding, but their wisdom oof the universe of thought.
  - int_19h 5y ago
    Philomath?
xyzzyz 5y ago
Here's a non-poetical translation in more straightforward English using standard word ordering in a sentence. Needless to say, Kandel's "translation" is not so much a translation, but really a completely new poem. Hope that will make it easier for you to appreciate the original: A shy cyberneticists got to know[1] some powerful extremes, when he integrated[2] cyberiads[3] on a steamy afternoon, not knowing whether there is love, or there isn't yet. Get out of my face[4], get out, Laplacians from evening to morning, and versors of the vectors from morning to evening. Come closer, preimages! Closer, because it's time to reduce the lover into the embrace of the lover[5]. He will change half-metric trembles, united by moans, into rotation groups and feedbacks[6], so cascading, and so stunning, that they risk a short-circuit, going from eye to eye! You, transfinal class! You, strong enormity! Irreducible continuum! White pre-structure! I'll give up Christoffel and Stokes for an entire century in exchange for the first and the last derivative of love. Show the multipronged[7] depths of your scalar spaces to the one who's entangled[8] in the Theorem of the Body[9], you, cyberiad of cypresses, entirely bimodal in gradients, multiplied into pidgeon flights! Lo, he did not live to experience pleasure, who so without grey hair, neither in Weyl nor Brouwer spaces, topological study opens with an embrace, studying curvatures not known to Moebius! Lo, multilayered comittant[10] of feelings, how much you need to be treasured will only be learned by the one[11] who, experiencing phantom of such parameters, dies in nanoseconds, burning every moment! Like a point, entering into holonomy configuration, losing coordinates of zero on an asymptote, in a last projection, with a last caress, dies from love the cyberneticist, when he's bid farewell. [1] - "poznawał" in original, past form of "poznawać", the most important meanings are "to be meeting a new person", "to be recognizing something/someone", or "to be learning something", hard to figure out which meaning is intended. [2] - "całkował", a mathematical term meaning "to integrate" [3] - a word made up by Lem [4] - "precz" [5] - first "lover" is female, second is male [6] - "sprzężenia zwrotne" [7] - "wielolistne", literally "multileaved", from "leaf", "liść" [8] - "uwikłanemu", probably a reference to "twierdzenie o funkcji uwikłanej", "implicit function theorem" [9] - "Teoremat Ciała", a more mathematical translation would have "Theorem of the Field", as the mathematical concept of the "field" translates to "ciało" (body) in Polish, similar to e.g. "Körper" in German, which also stands for "mathematical field". [10] - "komitanto", I don't even know what this word is supposed to mean in Polish. [11] - a verse from very famous Polish epic poem "Pan Tadeusz" by Adam Mickiewicz

Finnucane 5y ago

I know Michael Kandel, and asked him about that once. He admitted that there were times when he had to literally make stuff up to make it work in English. Tangentially, I once had a job where I had to locate passages in Phil Dick's novels based on English translations of French editions. In many cases it was non-obvious, in a few cases it couldn't be done at all. There were passages in the french that just didn't exist in the original.

pmoriarty 5y ago
"I once had a job where I had to locate passages in Phil Dick's novels based on English translations of French editions. In many cases it was non-obvious, in a few cases it couldn't be done at all. There were passages in the french that just didn't exist in the original." That's funny, because PKD once wrote of a game wherein the players translate from one language to another and back again (he wrote this long before computer translation existed, by the way). If anyone remembers which PKD novel this was in and any details about the game, I'd love to hear about it, as I no longer remember myself.
- samstave 5y ago
  I am convinced PKD is a time traveler
- srean 5y ago
  > That's funny, because PKD once wrote of a game wherein the players translate from one language to another and back again (he wrote this long before computer translation existed, by the way). The popular, over used, example of that would be: The flesh is weak but the spirit is willing. The meat is rotten but the vodka is good.
- js2 5y ago
  It's Galactic Pot-Healer: https://everything2.com/title/machine+translation https://everything2.com/title/machine+translation https://scifi.stackexchange.com/questions/240589/need-author-title-source-for-short-story-with-translation-game-short-phrase https://scifi.stackexchange.com/questions/240589/need-author... Here's an excerpt: “Do you have a title for me?” Joe asked; he held his pen ready. “The Tokyo translating computer has been tied up all morning,” Gauk answered. “So I put it through the smaller one at Kobe. In some respects Kobe is more—how shall I put it?—quaint than Tokyo.” He paused, consulting a slip of paper; his office, like Joe’s, consisted of a cubicle, containing only a desk, a phone, a straight-backed chair made of plastic and a note pad. “Ready?” “Ready.” Joe made a random scratch-mark with his pen. Gauk cleared his throat and read from his slip of paper, a taut grin on his face; it was a sleek expression, as if he were certain of himself on this one. “This originated in your language,” Gauk explained, honoring one of the rules which all of them together had made up, the bunch of them scattered here and there across the map of Earth, in little offices, in puny positions, with nothing to do, no tasks or sorrows or difficult problems. Nothing but the harsh vacuity of their collective society, which each in his own way objected to, which all of them, in collaboration, circumvented by means of The Game. “Book title,” Gauk continued. “That’s the only clue I’ll give you.” “Is it well known?” Joe asked. Ignoring his question, Gauk read from the slip of paper. “‘The Lattice-work Gun-stinging Insect.’” “Gun-slinging?” Joe asked. “No. Gun-stinging.” “‘Lattice-work,’” Joe said, pondering. “Network. ‘Stinging Insect.’ Wasp?” He scratched with his pen, stumped. “And you got this from the translation computer at Kobe? Bee,” he decided. “‘Gun,’ so Gun-bee. Heater-bee. Laser-bee. Rod-bee. Gat.” He swiftly wrote that down. “Gat-wasp, gat-bee. Gatsby. ‘Lattice-work.’ That would be a grating. Grate.” He had it now. “The Great Gatsby, by F. Scott Fitzgerald.” He tossed down his pen in triumph. “Ten points for you,” Gauk said. He made a tally. “That puts you even with Hirshmeyer in Berlin and slightly ahead of Smith in New York. You want to try another?” [...] Dialing his phone, he obtained a satellite relay to Japan; he raised Tokyo and gave the digits for the Tokyo translating computer. With the skill of long habit he obtained a direct line to the great, clanking, booming construct; he bypassed its host of attendants. “Oral transmission,” he informed it. The hulking GX9 computer clicked over to oral, rather than visual, reception. “The Corn Is Green,” Joe said. He turned on the recording unit of his phone. At once the computer answered, giving the Japanese equivalent. “Thank you and out,” Joe said, and rang off. He then dialed the translating computer at Washington, D.C. Rewinding the tape of his phone recorder he fed the Japanese words—again in oral form—to the computer segment which would translate the Japanese utterance into English. The computer said, “The cliché is inexperienced.” “Pardon?” Joe said, and laughed. “Repeat, please.” “The cliché is inexperienced,” the computer said with godlike nobility and patience. “That’s an exact translation?” Joe inquired. “The cliché is—” “Okay,” Joe said. “Sign off.” He hung up and sat grinning; his energy, aroused by human amusement, surged up and invigorated him. For a moment he sat hesitating, deciding, and then he dialed good ol’ Smith in New York. “Office of Procurement and Supply, Wing Seven,” Smith said; his beaglelike face, haunted by ennui, manifested itself on the little gray screen. “Oh, hey there, Fernwright. Got something for me?” “An easy one,” Joe said. “‘The Cliché Is—’” “Wait’ll you hear mine,” Smith interrupted. “Me first; come on, Joe—this is a great one. You’ll never get it. Listen.” He read swiftly, stammering over the words. “Bogish Persistentisms. By Shaft Tackapple.”

ttctciyf 5y ago

You might like to read a page[1] which allows you to compare Kandel's version with a literal translation of the > poem about a haircut! But lofty, noble, tragic, timeless, full of love, treachery, retribution, quiet heroism in the face of certain doom! Six lines, cleverly rhymed, and every word beginning with the letter S!! which was duly delivered by Trurl's Electrobard in the same story. 1: https://mwichary.medium.com/seduced-shaggy-samson-snored-725b5a8086d9 https://mwichary.medium.com/seduced-shaggy-samson-snored-725...