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>The "rewrite in some corporate meme language" would address this issue. No it won't, the issues with v2 are with its design, not its implementation.
by hyproxia 5y ago
>The "rewrite in some corporate meme language" would address this issue.
No it won't, the issues with v2 are with its design, not its implementation.
- hyproxia 5y agoOff-topic, but can someone tell me if this comment is phrased properly? I suspect that using "with" twice in the sentence is a little bit wrong, but I don't know how to correct it.
- Zababa 5y agoI think it's fine but the repetition sounds wrong, if that makes sense.
- jrh206 5y agoPersonally I would say: “the issue with v2 is its design, not its implementation” or “one of the issues with v2 is its design, not its implementation”. However your initial phrasing is perfectly intelligible, and probably grammatical (not that that’s so important, if it’s intelligible).