Author here - would definitely appreciate any more feedback on it being a misfire. Was it unfocused? Inaccurate? Boring? (edit) Alternatively if easier to chat

Author here - would definitely appreciate any more feedback on it being a misfire. Was it unfocused? Inaccurate? Boring? (edit) Alternatively if easier to chat 1:1 would love to talk via email, our address is on this page: https://staysaasy.com/about.html https://staysaasy.com/about.html (don't want to post our email onto a large public forum). Would really appreciate the feedback.