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http://watchdogdaemon.com http://watchdogdaemon.com Looks like a good MVP/start. It wasn't immediately clear what the service does, but it was pretty close.
by komlenic 16y ago
http://watchdogdaemon.com http://watchdogdaemon.com
Looks like a good MVP/start. It wasn't immediately clear what the service does, but it was pretty close. (I'm saying this is a good thing, but could be made great.)
I may be picking nits, but I think the word "innovative" in the leading sentence could be replaced with a more descriptive adjective that better defines what the service actually monitors. "innovative monitoring service" vs "____ monitoring service". Sorry, no suggestions off the top of my head.
I think the two sentences in the "REST API" section are good, but are just begging for a graphic to illustrate it.
Anything in particular that you are looking for a review on?
- kamiller 16y agoNot specifically, just a review of the copy to see if it is explanatory enough. Also if it seems like something useful. I like idea for a REST API graphic, I'm just not quite sure how it should look.
- komlenic 16y agoI think you could have one sort of flowchart at the top of the graphic, using arrows to indicate how my servers and devices can be pushing out calls to your service etc. I don't know the ins/outs of what you're doing, but think: my server -> your awesome service -> oooh charts Then underneath this main simple illustration, perhaps in grayscale, you could have an example of the "old" way to do something like this (and point out why it sucks).