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Your subheading text "Build and publish instantly your projects online" reads a little strangely to me. I'd recommend re-wording that to "Build and instantly pu
by bjohnso5 8y ago
Your subheading text "Build and publish instantly your projects online" reads a little strangely to me. I'd recommend re-wording that to "Build and instantly publish your projects online".
Looks neat, though!
- ummonk 8y agoOr better yet, "Build your projects and instantly publish them online", for ease of parsing.
- benatkin 8y agoHow about "Build your projects online and publish them instantly"?
- swlkr 8y agoHow about "Instantly build and publish your projects online" ?
- jwdunne 8y agoI reckon "Build online. Publish instantly" has a nice ring to it.
- artf 8y agoThanks to everyone for the advice, what do you think about "Build your projects and publish them instantly online"?
- HeyLaughingBoy 8y agojwdunne nailed it with https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=18017791 https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=18017791