This guy has some great points. I can't get past the fact that he didn't review his writing at all, nor did he have anyone else proof-read it. The writing qua

This guy has some great points. I can't get past the fact that he didn't review his writing at all, nor did he have anyone else proof-read it. The writing quality is poor. "... your way your way...", "... just a by standard...", improper uses of "then", "this tasks" etc... all distract from the thesis.