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The home page doesn't really tell me what it does. It's all marketing style corporate speak that I don't really understand. You should really change your tagli
by Vindexus 17y ago
The home page doesn't really tell me what it does. It's all marketing style corporate speak that I don't really understand.
You should really change your tagline to be more of a description of your service than a marketing phrase. "Since cold leads don't fit in the microwave" tells me nothing about your service.
"LeadNuke is the missing link in your existing sales pipeline; it helps you kick-start the sales process."
That doesn't really tell me anything either.
"LeadNuke is a streamlined process that helps you find, track, and follow-through with news articles, blog posts, and RSS feeds from your industry, turning them into meaningful sales leads. LeadNuke helps you generate qualified leads and initiate a dialog with prospects who actually need your product or service."
This also doesn't really tell me much.
I looked down your home page further and I'm guessing this is some sort of email marketing service. You should definitely use the word email in your descriptions so people know that's what it is.
- JangoSteve 17y agoAll that marketing style corporate speak is because it's a product aimed at the marketing people. I agree about the tagline, that was me having a bit of fun.
- HeyLaughingBoy 17y agoEven so, consider simplifying it thusly: LeadNuke helps you generate qualified sales leads from online news articles and feeds If this is what it really does, it would have explained it to me immediately.