Interesting stories. Better copy editing would make them easier to read. "Ed had shouted on them like this" "No real kidnapper hauls around a struggling, scre

Interesting stories. Better copy editing would make them easier to read. "Ed had shouted on them like this" "No real kidnapper hauls around a struggling, scream-seeking captive" "I see I need to show the adolescent asshole affecting to be me " Broken sentences like these make the stories a bit of a chore to read.