The idea seems good. Have you thought about asking someone with experience in web design to make a more streame-lined and less clunky version of the landing pag

The idea seems good. Have you thought about asking someone with experience in web design to make a more streame-lined and less clunky version of the landing page? I think you are on a good way in terms of keeping it simple but in my humble opinion the execution isn't quite there yet. I'm not that competent of a designer myself but I'd bet someone who knows his stuff could improve the page quite a bit.